tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1755387932861710489.post4959374596292469597..comments2013-11-04T13:43:38.229-08:00Comments on Wooden Pencils: Revisions, Revisions, RevisionsEric Khonghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06715693630826572286noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1755387932861710489.post-67547751958241925282013-10-21T18:22:24.316-07:002013-10-21T18:22:24.316-07:00First of all, you posted this at 4 in the morning....First of all, you posted this at 4 in the morning. This shouldn't surprise me anymore, but it still does...<br /><br />Anyways, I agree that revising small sections of your paper is so much better than trying to re-read the whole thing and revise everything at once because you can focus better. And, I think we all know that you're a fantastic writer and one who loves writing too. I should give a heads up for your future students and tell them that they've got the best writing teacher they could ever ask for! :)jinykimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06713701834353836937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1755387932861710489.post-70994245540041520142013-10-21T13:28:47.212-07:002013-10-21T13:28:47.212-07:00Eric,
I feel like your revised paragraph really an...Eric,<br />I feel like your revised paragraph really answered the “So What?” question that is so elusive when writing a paper. I could tell that you really thought about your reader and what they would be thinking. You made it so that any question the reader might have had in the original paragraph was answered or cleared up in the revision. You are absolutely right that the concept of learning from your mistakes to become a better writer is what we as teachers should be promoting and modeling for our students. All of that to say well done Eric. <br />~Allyson <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05936885685197420729noreply@blogger.com